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7th grade story [Jul. 13th, 2006|03:57 pm]
this is a story i wrote in 7th grade but i forget what i wanted the ending to be, comment:

Master Plan
Phase 1:


It was October 25, 2002; that was the day that mine and my pal Benny’s life was changed forever!
It all started when we were going to the bank with my mom on this cool October day.

When we got to the bank, there was a huge line of people. Mom told us to wait in the car.
In the car, I turned on the radio.
“Hold it,” exclaimed Benny, “turn the radio down!”
“Why?” I asked.
“Shhhh, look.”
I turned my body around and saw a man. He was a creepy little man who just looked like he came from the Institution for the Altitude Challenged (which Benny and I narrowed down into one short term: Midget).
I despised them and the reason why was that when I was little, a midget did something I couldn’t ever forget!
“Hello,” said the man.
“Waaaaaah, Waaaaah,” I immediately began to cry
“Slap”
I remember that I cried and cried for weeks on end. The weird thing was that he didn’t even have a reason to commit such an act.
The weird thing though, was that it looked like he walked there.
He entered the bank.
“Stop him!” I heard someone call from the inside.
A split second later the mini man came dashing out of the bank speeding as fast as his short, stubby legs could take him.
At that point I was starting to suspect that something weird was going on.
That same second the culprit came jetting over to our car. He opened up the driver’s side door.
“Okay kids, I think we’re gonna go for a ride,” said the man in a sort of helium-inhaled voice.
As fast as you could say “moose pie and scrambled eggs” I darted into the back seat and we were off.
Before we knew it we were flying down the highway at 110 mph with more than a dozen cops chasing us.
The entire chase we were cowering in the back seat too scared to even blink.
The driver then ricocheted off the median and flew over the oncoming traffic.
When we landed everything went black.
I woke up to see a bleach white room. /

Phase 2:
As soon as I regained all of my consciousness I saw that Benny was in the room with me. The room wasn’t what it seemed at all! There were machines and bags of liquid beside Benny and me.
I stood up on the cold harsh floor and soon realized that I didn’t have my clothes on! I was wearing one of those hospital robes. I was in one!
“Honey? Are you awake?” spoke a soft and gentle voice.
“Mom!?! Is that really you?” I exclaimed hoarsely. My throat was dry and I could barely speak.
“Yes, Matt it’s me.”
“What happened?” I asked.
“You were in a tragic car accident,” informed a shadowed figure.
“Who’s that?” I asked Mom.
The shadowed figure walked into the light, “I’m the doctor that saved you and Benny’s life.”
“Ohhhhhhhhhhhh. Thanks.” I sighed with relief.
“Sweetie? When you were in the car did you see the culprit’s face?” asked Mom.
“No, I guess I didn’t, but I did get to see his height. He was about as tall as me; I think he was a midget. His voice sounded like he inhaled 7 pounds of helium though.”
“Wonder where he is now,” the doctor said.
“What? You didn’t get him after the crash?” I shouted getting tenser with every word.
“He was nowhere to be found.”

phase 3:
/We didn’t quite know at the time but just north of the Mexico/USA border two brothers were having their own conspiracy too.
October 31st 2002:
“Hey Ray gimme back my toothbrush!”
“Why should I? I think I’ll just stick it in the trashcan where it belongs.”
“Okay, listen, I’m sorry for embarrassing you in front of Melissa but, the kids at school made me do it!” explained Max.
“Fine, I just won’t talk to you anymore. How’s that for ya?” exclaimed Ray, kind of annoyed.
“I respect your decision but I’m still sorry so, if you find it in your heart, forgive me,” sympathized Max.
The next day when the boys awoke there mother was gone!
Ray was a 14 year old boy at the time. Max was 11. Their dad left home when Ray was 4 and didn’t even bother to say goodbye. When there mother disappeared the boys were heartbroken.
“I’m going to go look for her,” said Ray
“Let me come too! Please, I want to find her as much as you,” pleaded Max
“Whatever. This doesn’t mean I forgive you though.”
They entered the garage and got on there dirt bikes.
“These are the only transportation we have so don’t complain,” said Ray.
“Who’s complaining?!?”
After consulting Ray’s Palm Pilot they were on there way.
“Max, another unusual crime has happened this week. The place is just west of Orlando so our best bet is to cash in our savings bonds and buy two plane tickets and a spot for our bikes too.”
“Where, Orlando, Nevada? We can just drive there.”
“No, Orlando, Florida,” answered Ray.


Phase 4
It was a rainy day. Benny and I were doing everything we usually do, playing video games, reading comic books, and even going on the internet. Even though rain is a huge bummer that was one of the good, danger free, days for us.
Then we got a call.
“Hello?” said Ray
“Hi this is Matt.”
“Oh you’re the kid that was kidnapped by the midget.”
“Ya? So?” I said Matt getting a little irritated.
“Don’t take it personal or anything it’s just that our Mom has been kidnapped and we think it’s the same person or persons,” said Ray
“Where are you?” I asked.
”We’re coming to see you.”
“More importantly who are you?” I shouted.
“My name is Ray. We’ll be there tomorrow.”
“Wait a minute?!? We!?!”
“Uh… See you soon, Bye!”
That was the weirdest phone call I have ever had; and I tell you I have had some weird ones.
“Who was that?” asked Benny.
“Oh some kid named Ray,” I explained, “He said that he’s coming to see us, he thinks he may have a lead on the midgets.”
“Why did you add an “s” to the word?” asked Benny getting worried.
“I think that we have stumbled into some national crime gang, maybe even global!”

The next day Benny and I were sitting on the porch fixing our go karts waiting for Ray and his mysterious “we” when we heard a low rumble which got louder and louder until it came into view. There were two dirt bikes, one was shorter than the other. They did a donut on my lawn before stopping.
/The tall one took off his helmet.
“Excuse me but why did you do a donut on my lawn.”
“I’m sorry do you know where Matt is, this is the right place right?” asked Ray.
“Yes this is he, now who are you?!?” I exclaimed.
“My name is Ray, the kid on the phone. You sounded a bit older though,” informed Ray.
“So, your Ray! We have been waiting for you.”
“Who’s this?” asked Ray pointing to Benny.
“That’s Benny, he’s my friend,” I said proudly.
“In order to catch this guy or these guys we have to get some research done,” said Ray.
“Let’s do it. Ray, come with me Benny go with- who’s that?” I asked.
“That’s Max, he’s very shy,” said Ray.
“Benny go with Max. Let’s get to it,” I said.
When we all got our assignments Ray and I headed for the biggest computer database, about news, that we knew of; the Orlando Air Base.
When we were there Ray had a question, “Exactly how are we supposed to get in with all this security?”
“Easy, my dad works here.”
“Where is he?” Ray asked.
“Out of town but we can still go in.” I said enthusiastically.
“Hello Matt,” said one of the guards, “What brings you to the Base?”
“I was hoping I could do some research on the CIA database,”
“Ummm, Okay, but just because your dad works here.”
We got through the gate and were arrayed by people.
“How high of a rank is your dad?” asked Ray.
“He’s the vice president of the National Defense Department.”
/We walked to my dad’s desk and sat down.
I turned on the computer and to my surprise I had an e-mail. The e-mail said that Benny and Max had a lead!
I wrote back and said that after we did some research we’d meet at 7:00 pm at my house.
I entered the database and searched for odd kidnappings.
The search took a while but it came up with two things.
I picked the first link and was brought to a site on how to keep your kid, napping.
I clicked on the second one and was brought to a police report about two kids.
“Did you file a police report?” I asked Ray.
“No, why?” answered Ray.
“I was just wondering. It says that two kids got kidnapped in northern California,” I examined
The report gone on to tell that the boat they got kidnapped on crashed and the kids were found tied up in it, the kidnapper was gone.
“The kids said that the kidnapper was a midget,” I informed, “I’ll print this out and we’ll head home to see what Max and Benny found.”
“Let’s go then,” said Ray, a little anxious to get going, “This place is creepy.”

Phase 5:
At the house Benny and Max were already waiting.
“What did you guys find?” I asked, excited as I could ever be to hear about a crime.
“Our information is too valuable to go first you guys can go first,” said Max.
“Fine,” Ray said
“We found out that there was another kidnapping in northern California and-“
I was cut off by the sounds of two mini-bikes entering on stage right.











/There were two kids on the mini-bikes. They pulled up to my house and stopped.
One of the kids took off there helmet.
“Hi, my name is John,” said John, obviously.
“Hi what brings you to my lovely home?” I asked.
“Our father was kidnapped. We were looking for a kid named Matt to help get him back.” John said.
“Well my name is Matt and I was kidnapped. I think that I’m the man that you want to see!”
“Great! I really hope that we can save our dad,” exclaimed John, “Introduce yourself Megan.”
The other kid on the mini-bike stood up and took off her helmet.
“Hello, my name is Megan and I am his sister,” Megan said, pointing to John.
“So you’re the kids that the kidnapping happened to,” I said, “Why did you come here?”
“We thought that you could help us,” said Megan.
“So are we all victims of kidnappings or is someone lying? If they are speak now…” Benny said a little sarcastically.
“Benny, I think that we all were victims, does it really matter anyway?” I said, “So Benny, what did you and Max find?”
“Okay, if you really want to know. Do you remember when you were little and that man came up to you and punched you?”
“Ya, why?” I asked.
“Well that man went to Jail right?” asked Benny, ”He broke out of jail two weeks later.”
“I remember that he was a little on the short side too.” I said, “Wait a minute, maybe he’s the one overseeing the crime spree!”
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:) [Jun. 5th, 2006|10:47 am]
i really really love manda :D
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